Running
Since I'm currently "free", I wrote something out the blue.
Do comment and HEALTHY criticism is welcomed.
I race up five flights of stairs and break open the door to the roof with a single kick. Once my eyes adjust to the brightness of the sun, I hurdle a few solar power generators, dodging gun fire from my enemy nearby.
I need to lose altitude fast, so I leap off the side of the building, my arms and legs pumping furiously as I gaze down at the tiny cars a dozen stories below. When I land on the roof of a nearby building, I tuck and roll to absorb the impact. Despite breaking my fall, my ankle got twist real bad. My enemy targets me again as I notice that there’s a chicken-wire fence topped with barbed wire between me and my next objective. How the hell do I get past that?
With less than a second to think, I clearly lost control of myself. Instincts soon took over, daring me to make another death defying move, jumping off the building and grabbing hold of a pole that protruded out of building. Should I do it?
Maybe if I'm a little bit more free, I might continue the story. DO COMMENT thanks.
Do comment and HEALTHY criticism is welcomed.
I race up five flights of stairs and break open the door to the roof with a single kick. Once my eyes adjust to the brightness of the sun, I hurdle a few solar power generators, dodging gun fire from my enemy nearby.
I need to lose altitude fast, so I leap off the side of the building, my arms and legs pumping furiously as I gaze down at the tiny cars a dozen stories below. When I land on the roof of a nearby building, I tuck and roll to absorb the impact. Despite breaking my fall, my ankle got twist real bad. My enemy targets me again as I notice that there’s a chicken-wire fence topped with barbed wire between me and my next objective. How the hell do I get past that?
With less than a second to think, I clearly lost control of myself. Instincts soon took over, daring me to make another death defying move, jumping off the building and grabbing hold of a pole that protruded out of building. Should I do it?
Maybe if I'm a little bit more free, I might continue the story. DO COMMENT thanks.
Sound like an action movie.. i feel is very good, don't know how long i will take to write something like this:D but i am curious whether the story should be in present or past tense.
Why not you continue from what you posted. Like part 1 part 2. Then this is the preface of the whole story. :D
I say continue! I like reading/writing stuff in present tense actually, since we don't get to write it in class. It goes very well with the fast pace of this story.
its really awesome write more!